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Untarnished Dove by ~cap10:iconcap10:



Heavenly tears cold and white
Pair with the soiled ground
Innocence is forever lost
A lifetime in exchange for a moment
Cold fingers press on the window pane
One face looks alone on the play
She lays curled up and wonders
What is so wrong with remaining the untarnished dove?
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A little bit of pain that needed to be let out...

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:iconkuraiyamitsuki:
Nicely written, but it has me worried. Are you doing ok?

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"The cake is a lie..." -Portal
"If at first you don't succeed, you fail." -Portal
"The only point is at the end of my sword, fool." -Albel, SO3.
"Look! Cloud's vibrating again." - me
:iconcap10:
I wrote it last semester...you know what was going on.

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I just met this great new guy...His fictional, but you can't have everything
:iconmemorymantel:
that's very poignant; i can feel the pain emanating from it. i'm sorry, i don't know what happened but i hope you feel better now.

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Sometimes I wonder if you're all just figments of my imagination...
:iconcap10:
Thanks, I am feeling pretty good. Putting the poem up was my way of putting the pain behind me.

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I just met this great new guy...His fictional, but you can't have everything
:icondragonmystic:
Glad you were able to let the pain out.

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Dragons have many ways of dealing with adversity. . .they just prefer fire.
Dragonadopters Dragonpage: [link]

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